Camp Bentzon

Camp Bentzon

“Bags on buses’” yelled Mr Burt. I grab my bag and rushed to a bus. I had to put pressure on my hands as I was pushing my bags in a small area.

I sped into the hall, huffing and puffing making it harder and harder to breath.
We did a karakia and then we sprinted onto the bus. We waved to our guardians and then finally the bus started moving. We started singing and we started talking. The bus took hours and hours to go to sandspit, north of auckland.

Finally we’re at Sandspit. I grabbed my bag and dragged it onto the ferry. I watched the sea go past as others talked and blabbed about the upcoming camp.

“wroommmmm” goes the boat as it parks into the camp Bentzon Wharf. Peter and Erin runs to see the us do our haka then we carefully walk outside of the Ferry and wait for someone to give you random bags to carry to the camp. I grabbed a bag and carried it to the camp and sat down waiting for all the bags to be at the camp.

After that we had a tiring walk ( more like a hike) up the mountain and then down to the other side of the mountain after that we walked up the mountain and then down again.

1st day of camp was the tiring day ever.
Camp was cool.

The Bleeding Stunt

On a sunny day a boy named sonny. He loved to free run.


Every year he makes a competition to every free runners near the neighborhood. This year for the first time he participated. Three days left, time was ticking. Quickly he rushed to the free runner park where the competition setted. He practised and practised and practise for hours. Finally it was the day he had lots of water and ate a nice healthy breakfast. He rushed to the park, just in time for his turn he did his easy stunts and then a another stunt.  A boy named Luis cheated and put his leg in front making sonny fall onto the ground with a long cut on his leg.


The ambulance rushed into action took him to the hospital. Sonny had a serious hurt and took him weeks and weeks to recover. The competition was cancelled and luis felt guilty and visited Sonny after two weeks of the accident. He apologised and gave him a chocolate bar.


The next year sonny won the competition and Luis won the competition the next year. Luis and Sonny became best friends and they had the coolest times ever.

The Fresh Meat

Once upon a time there lived a team of 4 and they were stranded in a country of Europe. Europe was a zombie only country, no humans, no  animals just freaky creatures walking around looking for fresh meat.


The team looked for an plane or car to survive but all they had was a bag full of weapons, food and drinks. The team had  boys called Faaiua, Henry, Lukis and Tame. The team tried phones for all the satellites had broke down. What were they going to do without electricity, transport and signal.  Zombies had spotted them Quickly they rushed through the streets and quickly into a safe room in a house. They looked at the cameras they were out numbered. Quickly  they grabbed the weapons from their bag. “ three, two, one!” Tame  said. Quickly they got out and shot them down. More and more zombie kept coming. Lukis ran to check if they were all dead. “ Lukis turn around.” Lukis got eaten.  They kept shooting till the last zombie died. As they went through the streets they found a ladie with seven kids hiding in another safe room.


The Team had moved to another country called  Samoa. They had a vacation and they lived happily ever after.

Gold Stone Bush

One rainy day, there was an adventurous girl who loved to go on adventures. She lived in a small cottage near a steep hill. Her name was Angelica.

Angelica and her family were poor and had ate all the crops they grew on the side of their house. Angelica's mother Katherine was going nuts with no food so she send Angelica to go to Gold Stone Bush. That was the only way to a village called Peleca. Legend say that Gold Stone Bush was a dangerous place to go. Who ever travelled through Gold Stone Bush never came back. She ran quickly down the hill and through the rusty Bridge and finally at Gold Stone Bush. She passed the trees and into another bridge. This bridge had holes in it and missing pieces of wood. She couldn’t cross the bridge. She screamed and said, “ How am I going to cross the bridge !.”


She thought and thought and still nothing. She saw a man with a horse. They were riding near her and she asked him how to cross the bridge and he said, “ the light that shines is the way to Peleca.” and he vanished, fading through the air. She walked on the side of the bush and saw three bridges that lighted up like a firefly. She knew one could lead her to Peleca. She threw two stones on each bridge two fell one stood tall. She turned back and a raccoon chased her across the bridge and into a steep hill that lead her to Peleca. She asked the people for food and they gave six bread, seventeen fish and a bag full of crops to grow. She ran back home but it was too late her dad had starved to death. She gave mum the food and cried through the night.


Angelica became first to cross Gold Stone Bush and the man was never seen again. They lived happily ever after.

The Gun Shots of Evil

Once upon a time at Pt England Shopping Centre there was a man called Jake.

He went to buy butter and bread. He rushed to the back and rushed into a man called johnson. Bang Bang Bang! goes the entrance, quickly they rushed out they saw a man wearing a black coated with a black beany was robbing the shops.

They stood quietly and zoom goes the robber. He quickly jumped on him and punched his back. Johnson called the cops and the cops zoomed in the parking and took him to jail.

Johnson  and Jake was on the newspaper and world wide news. They never forgot that day and they lived happily ever after.

The Frozen Beach

Once upon a time there lived a boy called Jack. Jack lived in a hostel. He lived in the hostel with a another boy called Johnson.


They had been kept in the hostel ever since they were born. In 1993 they escaped the hostel . They had two problems. Firstly they ran to the beach but the beach was frozen. Secondly they were chased by the hostile guards.

In the beach they met a couple and the people on the beach and they had a very good time meeting the couple but the hostile guards captured them. The couple howled, “ We want to adopt Johnson and Jack.” Quickly the guards stopped and gave them the adoption paper and they signed the paper.

They couldn't swim in the beach so they ice skate on it. All enjoyed their day including Johnson and Jack. Also they lived Happily Ever After! The End